Homework
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Q: Do you ever dream of becoming a dentist in the future? Why or why not?
A: I\'ve never dreamt about becoming a dentist.
If I am a dentist, I need to see in other people\'s mouth everyday, and I think if I do that, I could be retired easily.
So I think dentists are hard jobs.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If I am a dentist, I need to see in other people\'s mouth everyday, and I think if I do that, I could be retired easily.
3. So I think dentists are hard jobs.
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Please take note of the following:
1. I\'ve never dreamt about becoming a dentist.
>>I\'ve never dreamt of becoming a dentist.
2. If I am a dentist, I need to see in other people\'s mouth everyday, and I think if I do that, I could be retired easily.
>>If I were to become a dentist, I would need to look at other people\'s mouths every day, and I think I\'d have to retire early if that\'s the case.
3. So I think dentists are hard jobs.
>>So, I think being a dentist is a hard job.
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