homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “What is the importance of the Internet in our lives?”
The Internet makes our lives convenient. There are many things that have become possible through the Internet.
I will not adjust to life without the Internet.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
The Internet makes our lives convenient.
>> CORRECT
There are many things that have become possible through the Internet.
>>CORRECT!
OR >> There are many things that have been made possible through the use of the Internet.
I will not adjust to life without the Internet.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t think I can adjust to life without the internet.
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