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I recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace. Because it has many beautiful palace and it\'s front of is there cool sculptures. I went to Gyeongbokgung Palace with my mom so that\'s more beautiful.
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I recommend Gyeongbokgung Palace. Because it has many beautiful palace and it\'s front of is there cool sculptures.
>> For me, the most beautiful place in Korea is the Gyeongbokgung Palace because it has many beautiful palaces and it has cool sculptures in front of it.
I went to Gyeongbokgung Palace with my mom so that\'s more beautiful.
>> I went to Gyeongbokgung Palace with my mom and it made the place more beautiful for me.
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