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학생이 쓴 원문
I am not influenced by others.
So I sometimes heard that I am stubborn.
That’s my weakness.
I think I am a influencer type.
People often ask for advice their problem from me.
They consider me objective person.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ms. [이름]ny!
People who are not easily influenced by others are seen in a negative way. We can be like that but learn the proper way by choosing the correct words and how to decline. Mi[이름]derstandings happen because of the wrong approach and way.
Aki~
I am not influenced by others.
>>> CORRECT!
So I sometimes heard that I am stubborn.
>>> CORRECT!
That’s my weakness.
>>> CORRECT!
I think I am a influencer type.
>>> I think I am an influencer type.
People often ask for advice their problem from me.
>>> People often ask for advice on their problems from me.
They consider me objective person.
>>> They consider me an objective person.
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