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WRITING TASK: What movies would you like to watch with friends and family?
I\'d like to watch Romance movie with my friends and family.
Beacause recently I want to date with man.
But I can\'t find person who I like.
So Romance movie replaces dating.
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That sounds interesting, Melody! I hope you can get valuable lessons on dating for watching romantic movies.-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What movies would you like to watch with friends and family?>> CORRECT
I\'d like to watch Romance movie with my friends and family. Beacause recently I want to date with man.
>> I\'d like to watch a romantic movie with my friends and family because recently, I want to date a man.
But I can\'t find person who I like. So Romance movie replaces dating.
>> However, I can\'t find a person who I like, so romantic movies replace dating.
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