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Q: What are the good and bad sides of having a sibling?
A: I think the good side of having a sibling is I can discuss with them.
Sometimes, I could have some problems that can\'t be solve by myself, I can talk those with my siblings.
And I think the bad side is I may fight with them more then usual.
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2. Sometimes, I could have some problems that can\'t be solve by myself, I can talk those with my siblings.
3. And I think the bad side is I may fight with them more then usual.
Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the good side of having a sibling is I can discuss with them.
>>CORRECT!
2. Sometimes, I could have some problems that can\'t be solve by myself, I can talk those with my siblings.
>>Sometimes, I might have problems that I can\'t solve by myself, so I can talk about them with my siblings.
3. And I think the bad side is I may fight with them more then usual.
>>I think the bad side is that I might fight with them more than usual.
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