homework
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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “Would you prefer buying a drink or making your own? and why?”
I prefer to buying a drink because I don\'t know how to make that.
But if I learn how to make a drink, I want to make it myself.
I think that would be more fun.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
I prefer to buying a drink because I don\'t know how to make that.
>> I prefer buying a drink because I don\'t know how to make one.
But if I learn how to make a drink, I want to make it myself.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> But if I learn how to make a drink, I want to make my own instead of buying from a cafe.
I think that would be more fun.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think, that would be more interesting and fun.
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