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Of course I want my sons to be sociable.
hanging out with friends is happy and they can get rid of stress from their company.
And also they could be courageous .
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Great morning, [이름]ny!
hanging out with friends is happy and they can get rid of stress from their company.
And also they could be courageous .
You have a very positive outlook in life. Some parents don\'t like their children to go out often, because of what is happening arouond us these days.
Aki~
Of course I want my sons to be sociable.
>>> CORRECT!
hanging out with friends is happy and they can get rid of stress from their company.
>>> Hanging out with friends make them happy and they can get rid of stress from their company.
And also they could be courageous .
>>> This will also make them courageous.
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