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These days, I don\'t have much time to enjoy hobbies. Still, I sometimes draw while waiting at a cafe while picking up my child from academy. As for my drawing subject, I like to record my daily life, so I sketch cafes, travel destinations, accommodations, etc. that I have visited.
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Hi, Eliana!
Doing something that yuo enjoy especially on your free times, relieves your from stress and boost your energy.
Have a great time.
Aki~
These days, I don\'t have much time to enjoy hobbies.
>>> CORRECT!
Still, I sometimes draw while waiting at a cafe while picking up my child from academy.
>>> Still, I sometimes draw while waiting at a cafe to pick my daughter up from the academy.
As for my drawing subject, I like to record my daily life, so I sketch cafes, travel destinations, accommodations, etc. that I have visited.
>>> CORRECT!
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