Homework
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Q: What mythical creature should not exist in the real world? Why?
A: I think the dragon should not exist in the real world.
It\'s because dragons have a lot of abilities that can destroy people\'s civilization and they have strong fire breath that can kill a lot of people.
And I think dwarves should not exist too because of their greed.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because dragons have a lot of abilities that can destroy people\'s civilization and they have strong fire breath that can kill a lot of people.
3. And I think dwarves should not exist too because of their greed.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the dragon should not exist in the real world.
>>I think dragons should not exist in the real world.
2. It\'s because dragons have a lot of abilities that can destroy people\'s civilization and they have strong fire breath that can kill a lot of people.
>>CORRECT!
3. And I think dwarves should not exist too because of their greed.
>>Also, I think dwarves should not exist, too, because of their greed.
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