homework

2023-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “Do you still have time to watch movies or series? How do you make time? If none, why so? Actually, I have a lot of time. It is because I don\'t study. But I think I should start studying soon.

강사 첨삭


Hi, Rick!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!

YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! 

-T.NIKKI ^^ 


Actually, I have a lot of time.
>> Actually, I do have a lot of time for watching movies. 

It is because I don\'t study.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is because I don\'t study at home. 

But I think I should start studying soon.
>> But I think studying is more important instead of watching movies 

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