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WRITING TASK: Tell me about the most memorable sports game you have watched.
The most memorable sports game I have watched is Diving game.
Last week, I went to the Mokpo for business trip.
In Mokpo, Korean National Sports Festival starts.
I learned Doping test process and watched many sports games.
Diving game was awesome.
Until Jumping, I can\'t predict athlete\'s movement.
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I always find those divers amazing, Melody! I wish I could watch them play in person someday.-Faith-
WRITING TASK: Tell me about the most memorable sports game you have watched.>> CORRECT
The most memorable sports game I have watched is Diving game.
>> The most memorable sports game I have watched was a diving game.
Last week, I went to the Mokpo for business trip.
>> Last week, I went to Mokpo for business trip.
In Mokpo, Korean National Sports Festival starts.
>> In Mokpo, the Korean National Sports Festival has started.
I learned Doping test process and watched many sports games.
>> I learned the doping test process and watched many sports games.
Diving game was awesome.
>> One of them was the diving game, and it was awesome.
Until Jumping, I can\'t predict athlete\'s movement.
>> Until the player jumps, I can\'t predict athletes\' movement.
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