Homework
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Q: Why do you think some people like to explore the deserts?
A: I think it\'s because most people never traveled the deserts.
I think some people has fun of experiencing the things that are not experienced by others because it\'s usually fantastic.
And I think traveling desert is one of the things that are not usually experienced by others.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think some people has fun of experiencing the things that are not experienced by others because it\'s usually fantastic.
3. And I think traveling desert is one of the things that are not usually experienced by others.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider in your answers:
1. I think it\'s because most people never traveled the deserts.
>>The reason is probably because most people have never traveled to the desert.
2. I think some people has fun of experiencing the things that are not experienced by others because it\'s usually fantastic.
>>Some people find it fun to experience the things that are not experienced by others, because they\'re usually fantastic.
3. And I think traveling desert is one of the things that are not usually experienced by others.
>>Also, I think traveling to the desert is one of the things that are not usually experienced by others.
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