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I only use white sugar for cooking.
Sugar controls the meat softly.
and sugar tastes better than other substitute ones.
But I use sugar small amount for health.
And I don’t care sugar substitutes is using eating food.
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Good morning Ms. [이름]ny!
They said that a recipe has no soul, You, as a cook must bring soul to the recipe. We may have our own way of cooking and our common denominator is LOVE. always enjoy what you do. have a nice day!
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I only use white sugar for cooking.
>>> CORRECT!
Sugar controls the meat softly.
>>> Sugar controls the tenderness of meat.
and sugar tastes better than other substitute ones.
>>> CORRECT!
But I use sugar small amount for health.
>>> But I use a small amount of sugar for my health.
And I don’t care sugar substitutes is using eating food.
>>> I don\'t think it matters if we use sugar substitutes while eating food.
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