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I prefer my entire family gather the restaurant
Which has independent room.
And the restaurant have to allow us to stay for 2hours.
My family can talk a lot for 2hours at there.
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I prefer my entire family gather the restaurant
>>> I prefer my entire family to gather at the restaurant.
Which has independent room.
>>> Which has an independent room.
>>> Which has a separate room.
And the restaurant have to allow us to stay for 2hours.
>>> And the restaurant has to allow us to stay for 2 hours.
My family can talk a lot for 2hours at there.
>> My family can talk a lot for 2 hours there.
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