Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Why is it necessary to not judge someone based on how they look?
A: I think it\'s because if I judge someone only with their appearance, I can misunderstand about them.
If I misunderstand something about others, the relation ship with others will be worse then before, and I think it\'s bad for me.
So I usually not judge people only with their appearance.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
3. So I usually not judge people only with their appearance.
Thank you for taking time in answering your homework!
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Here are some things to consider:
1. I think it\'s because if I judge someone only with their appearance, I can misunderstand about them.
>>If I judge someone only with their appearance, I might misunderstand them.
2. If I misunderstand something about others, the relation ship with others will be worse then before, and I think it\'s bad for me.
>>If I misunderstand something about others, my relationship with them might become worse than before, and I think it\'s bad for me.
3. So I usually not judge people only with their appearance.
>>So, I usually don\'t judge people only with their appearance.
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