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If A partner do behavior such as cheating, gambling and violence.
People even forgive it once.
But person’s native can’t be change easily.
They could repeat that again.
Their acting hurts to their partner.
It will break the trust of marrage.
I think The most impact of divorce is breaking trust.
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Hi [이름]ny!
I have a very high value on marriage. People get married because of love (that is my creed or principles) I don\'t approve of divorce however if a couple lives together without respect, I guess that could be a factor to let go of the principle.
Have a good day.
Aki!
If A partner do behavior such as cheating, gambling and violence.
>>> If a partner engages in behaviors such as cheating, gambling, or violence.
People even forgive it once.
>>> CORRECT!
But person’s native can’t be change easily.
>>> However a person\'s nature can\'t be changed easily.
They could repeat that again.
>>> CORRECT!
Their acting hurts to their partner.
>>> Their behavior hurts their partner.
>>> The way they act causes pain to their partner.
It will break the trust of the marriage.
>>> CORRECT!
I think The most impact of divorce is breaking trust.
>>> I think breaking someone\'s trust has the most impact on divorce.
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