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학생이 쓴 원문
How can you help someone who has trouble sleeping?
I think there are no way help trouble sleeping. It have to overcome yourself.
some people have to lose weight, some people need to have surgery for sleep
I can just help them give helpful tea or scented candle
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You have good points, [이름]. You explained your thoughts clearly. Happy weekend!-Faith-
I think there are no way help trouble sleeping. >> I think there are no ways to help people who have trouble sleeping.
It have to overcome yourself.
>> It has to be overcome by oneself.
some people have to lose weight, some people need to have surgery for sleep
some people have to lose weight, some people need to have surgery for sleep
>> Some people have to lose weight and some people need to have surgery for sleep.
I can just help them give helpful tea or scented candle
I can just help them give helpful tea or scented candle
>> I can just help them by giving them helpful tea or scented candles.
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