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Most happily memorize that I have ever bought is buying my car.
I always wanted to drive to go traveling.
In 2015 the dream came true.
Although It was used car.
Driving was the best dream of my life.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Sometimes, we need to give ourself one of the best things in life, for us to feel fulfilled. ENjoy the fruit of your labor :)
Aki~
Most happily memorize that I have ever bought is buying my car.
>>> The happiest memory that I have was buying my car.
I always wanted to drive to go traveling.
>>> I always wanted to drive when I go traveling.
>>> I always wanted to drive when I travel.
In 2015 the dream came true.
>>> In 2015, my dream came true.
Although It was used car.
>>> CORRECT!
Driving was the best dream of my life.
>>> CORRECT!
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