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2023-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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In the past, I enjoyed being with many people, so I participated in many meetings and organizational activities. But these days, my work alone is so overwhelming that I don\'t even dream of participating in any organizational activities.

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Hi, Eliana!
You know, I feel the same way. I was wondering whether my MBTI has changed. I recently noticed that I enjoy being alone. I guess it\'s part of aging.. haha! Thank you for this. Enjoy the weekend!
Aki~

In the past, I enjoyed being with many people, so I participated in many meetings and organizational activities. 
>>> CORRECT!

But these days, my work alone is so overwhelming that I don\'t even dream of participating in any organizational activities.
>>> CORRECT!

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