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I think there should be regular events and activities to help the poor. I also think that to be a part of that activity, you need to be consistent. When I was in my 20s, I also spent time with children at an orphanage and took pictures, but it was harder to do it consistently than I thought.
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Great day, Eliana!
Thank you for doing your homework, I hope that you won\'t get tired studying English, focus on the progress always :)
Aki~
I think there should be regular events and activities to help the poor.
>> CORRECT!
I also think that to be a part of that activity, you need to be consistent.
>> CORRECT!
When I was in my 20s, I also spent time with children at an orphanage and took pictures, but it was harder to do it consistently than I thought.
>> CORRECT!
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