Homework
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Q: What kind of musical will you direct if you are given the chance to be a musical director?
A: I will direct a musical which has a good story.
I like the movies or musicals that have good stories because they can make the watchers feel the characters\' feelings.
And I think it is more interesting.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I like the movies or musicals that have good stories because they can make the watchers feel the characters\' feelings.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I will direct a musical which has a good story.
>>CORRECT!
2. I like the movies or musicals that have good stories because they can make the watchers feel the characters\' feelings.
>>I like movies or musicals that have good stories because they can make the watchers feel the characters\' feelings.
3. And I think it is more interesting.
>>Also, I think that they are more interesting.
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