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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Han,
You’re so unbelievable reading your input makes me wonder, \"What?!\". Hehe, just kidding. Although not everyone enjoys challenges, I think they make us all stronger and more resilient. However, in your situation, you are creating your own challenges in life, even though I think there is a deeper reason why you need to get that certificate. Of course, your credentials will benefit from it.
-Chammy
The reason why I need to acquire the hotel certificate is because it is my
challenge.
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Getting the certificate is definitely not easy I know.
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I don\'t desire something anybody can get easily.
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This is my third time for those challenges.
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Whenever I challenge them, I made it anyway even though it took so long time.
>> Whenever I challenge them, I make it anyway even though it takes so long time.
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Whenever I am challenged, I make it anyway even though it takes me a long time.
I would like to enjoy the success to get it this time and continue to work in
the hotel with the certificate.
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I would like to enjoy the success of getting it this time and continue to work
in the hotel with the certificate.
This is my favorite proverb, No pain No gain.
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Chammy,
You seemed like you wonder how wonderful our hotel is.
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It seemed like you wondered how wonderful our hotel is.
Here is the link for you.
www.msgh.kr
Have a nice weekend.
Han.
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