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2023-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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WRITING TASK: What is the most interesting thing about your place? It\'s Olympic park. Olympic park is built in 1986 for 1988 Seoul Olympic. It still runs useful. Maybe, I think Olympic park is most useful olympic legacy in Korea.

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Wow! I saw online how huge Olympic Park is, Melody. Thank you for introducing this place and its background to me. Fantastic!

-Faith-

WRITING TASK: What is the most interesting thing about your place?
>> CORRECT
It\'s Olympic park.
>> It\'s Olympic Park.
Olympic park is built in 1986 for 1988 Seoul Olympic.
>> Olympic Park was built in 1986 for the 1988 Seoul Olympic Games.
It still runs useful.
>> CORRECT

OR It is still functional.
Maybe, I think Olympic park is most useful olympic legacy in Korea.

>> Olympic Park is the most useful Olympic legacy in Korea.

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