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I am unable to respond completely to your input because I am unfamiliar with the Kdrama you mentioned. But that seems interesting to me; perhaps I should set aside some time to watch it. By the way, I think lack of manpower is a common problem in most industries.
-Chammy
The problem faced by employees in hospitality industry is lacking manpower.
>>The problem faced by employees in the hospitality industry is the lack of manpower.
Even when the drama whose name is hotelier was popular, many people applied for working in the hotel.
>>Even when the drama whose name is Hotelier was popular, many people applied to work in the hotel.
OR
>> Even when the drama named “Hotelier” was popular, many people applied to work in the hotel.
It was great job at that time in 2002.
>> It was a great job at that time in
2002.
But many people know it is harder job than
expected.
>> But many people knew it was harder than expected.
Hotels are being managed by manpower whose rate is more than 90%.
>> Hotels are being managed by manpower which rate is more than 90%.
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