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One of my belongings that needs to be thrown away is a dog cage made of wire mesh. My dog ​​has a poor heart condition, so he can\'t beat or get excited, so he usually lives in a cage. I\'ve been using it as a dog house for about 4 years, and the wire cage is worn out and I think it\'s not good for my health, so I\'m planning to replace it with a new cage when I move.
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Good day, Eliana!
Sorry to hear about your dog, I cannot imagine a dog who is not supposed to be leaping and jumping every time he sees you because of his condition. How do you do it?
well, I can see that you love your dog very much because there are things that you consider buying for him, I hope all things work well.
Aki~
One of my belongings that needs to be thrown away is a dog cage made of wire mesh.
>>> CORRECT!
My dog has a poor heart condition, so he can\'t beat or get excited, so he usually lives in a cage.
>>> CORRECT!
I\'ve been using it as a dog house for about 4 years, and the wire cage is worn out and I think it\'s not good for my health, so I\'m planning to replace it with a new cage when I move.
>>> CORRECT!
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