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I received two wine glasses from my friend at last-year birthday.
People say It dosen’t matter people prepare cheap-priced thing for someone’s birthday.
There only have to include warm-heart in it.
But I don’t drink.
I thought she was not interested in me.
But I didn’t say anything to her.
I didn’t want to force to her.
I will be more careful to her.
Because I treat more be careful to unfamiliar friends.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
It\'s nice to see those people who remember your important days without telling them, but it\'s better to see people giving something on your special day- haha! People say \"it\'s the thought that counts\" yes I agree, if they really think well the things that you need or you like, but buying or giving something out of being impulsive for someone is a different story.
Enjoy your special day, it just happens once a year!
Aki~
I received two wine glasses from my friend at last-year birthday.
>>> CORRECT!
People say It dosen’t matter people prepare cheap-priced thing for someone’s birthday.
>>> People say It doesn’t matter if people prepare cheap-priced things for someone’s birthday.
There only have to include warm-heart in it.
>>> As long as they gave it with a warm heart.
But I don’t drink.
>>> CORRECT!
I thought she was not interested in me.
>>> CORRECT!
But I didn’t say anything to her.
>>> CORRECT!
I didn’t want to force to her.
>> I didn’t want to force her.
I will be more careful to her.
>> I will be more careful with her.
Because I treat more be careful to unfamiliar friends.
>>> CORRECT!
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