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2023-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Contracting I can’t understand this word enough. So I don’t know how to use this word properly. Can you give me an example for me? Well balanced If you want to live healthy, eating well balanced 3 major nutrients will help you. Poor diet Poor diet can ruin the hormone of your body. So it is more hard to lose your weight or to gain the muscle. You are better to eat fresh food that is not processed than processing food like snack, fast food.

강사 첨삭

Precisely, Heather! Nothing can beat natural and fresh food. My example for \'contracting\' is, \"We must still be extra careful these days to avoid contracting COVID-19.\" Have a better day!-Faith-

Contracting

>> CORRECT
I can’t understand this word enough.

>> CORRECT

So I don’t know how to use this word properly.

>> Therefore, I don’t know how to use this word properly.
Can you give me an example for me?
>> Can you give me an example?
Well balanced

>> CORRECT
If you want to live healthy, eating well balanced 3 major nutrients will help you.
>> If you want to live healthy, eating well balanced meals with three major nutrients will help you.

Poor diet

>> CORRECT
Poor diet can ruin the hormone of your body. So it is more hard to lose your weight or to gain the muscle.

>> Poor diet can ruin the hormones of your body, so it is harder to lose your weight or to gain muscles.
You are better to eat fresh food that is not processed than processing food like snack, fast food.

>> You will be better if you eat fresh food than processed food like snacks and fast food.

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