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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
As you expected, I drank too much last night, so I couldn\'t attend today\'s class.
I met my friends, one is a laywer and the other is a real estate agent.
We really enjoyed the Whiskey with sushi and raw fish.
And it gave me a strong hangover.
I couldn\'t sleep early because of headache.
Actually, I still have a headache now.
As I got up in the morning, I could have many delicious food that my wife prepared for me.
After I was done eating, I met my friend who lives near my house and has a membership of hotel facilities.
We did workout, swam, and enjoyed sauna together.
And we ate delicous food in hotel chinese restaurant at lunch.
He paid all expenses about hotel to celebrate my birthday.
After eating lunch, we visited a small aquarium.
We saw beautiful fish tanks there.
After that, I attended my guitar class.
And, I took a nap as I sat in the massage chair.
Now my wife is busy preparing some delicous food.
We will celebrate my brithday with a chocolate cake after dinner.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Happy birthday, Dr. [이름]!
It is the perfect day for you to celebrate because it is your day off after a night of whiskey. This way, we can say that it was grand at the same time, the way you wanted it to be-relaxing, having fun, and just spending some heart warming moments with your wife.
I hope that your hangover have subsided by now. Probably, the sauna and the rejuvenating afternoon made you feel better from your headaches.
It sounds like that the hotel is luxurious with some aquarium as well as fish tanks.
By now, you are slicing the cake and your daughters are singing you the birthday song.
Hence, we all wish you a very happy 42nd birthday! May all of your heart\'s desires and wishes come true!
See you then.
-T. Donna~
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As you expected, I drank too much last night, so I couldn\'t attend today\'s class.
>> Correct!
I met my friends, one is a laywer and the other is a real estate agent.
>> Correct!
Or: lawyer
Or: lawyer
We really enjoyed the Whiskey with sushi and raw fish.
>> Correct!
Or: whiskey
And it gave me a strong hangover.
And it gave me a strong hangover.
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t sleep early because of headache.
>> Correct!
Actually, I still have a headache now.
>> Correct!
As I got up in the morning, I could have many delicious food that my wife prepared for me.
>> Correct!
After I was done eating, I met my friend who lives near my house and has a membership of hotel facilities.
>> Correct!
We did workout, swam, and enjoyed sauna together.
>> Correct!
And we ate delicous food in hotel chinese restaurant at lunch.
>> And we ate delicious food in the hotel Chinese restaurant at lunch.
He paid all expenses about hotel to celebrate my birthday.
>> Correct!
After eating lunch, we visited a small aquarium.
After eating lunch, we visited a small aquarium.
>> Correct!
We saw beautiful fish tanks there.
We saw beautiful fish tanks there.
>> Correct!
After that, I attended my guitar class.
After that, I attended my guitar class.
>> Correct!!
And, I took a nap as I sat in the massage chair.
>> Correct!
Now my wife is busy preparing some delicous food.
>> Correct!
Or: delicious
Or: delicious
We will celebrate my brithday with a chocolate cake after dinner.
>> Correct!
Or: birthday
Or: birthday
See you.
>> Correct!
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