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2012-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Thank you. Here are my opinion. I agree this idea. because two years ago i went th exchange student for russia. certainly i had a bad experience. But i learn a good lesson. i want recommend to exchange student.

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Happy Tuesday my dear!  Thank you for participating and performing well in class. I am very much impressed with your ability. To enhance your English ability further, here are some points to improve. I hope that this will help speed up your learning. Take care and see you tomorrow! Have a wonderful day ahead!  Here is my tip for you today. Use \"but\" to connect 2 contrasting ideas in 1 sentence and \"because\" to introduce the reason, cause, or purpose of an action or situation. Examples: I got sick last Monday but I still managed to get an A+ in Math.                  I didn\'t come to class because I broke my foot. ~Teacher Lorraine    Thank you. >>CORRECT! Here are my opinion. >>Here are my opinions.  I agree this idea. because two years ago i went th exchange student for russia. >>I agree with this idea because I went through the Exchange Student Program in Russia. OR >>I agree with this idea because I have undergone the Exchange Student Program in Russia. certainly i had a bad experience.But i learn a good lesson. >>I certainly had a bad experience but i learned a good lesson from it. i want recommend to exchange student. >>I want to recommend the Exchange Student Program to others.  

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