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The best way to find my friend is to call to her. But if we can’t call each other, i will go to an information desk and ask them to make an announcement about my friend.
Or how about making a rule with friend during traveling? If we lost each other, we should meet at the entrance. It’s the rule during the travelling between us.
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We exactly think alike, Heather. If we had no phones, we could just select a meeting place where we could see each other. Take care!-Faith-
The best way to find my friend is to call to her. >> The best way to find my friend is to call to her.
But if we can’t call each other, i will go to an information desk and ask them to make an announcement about my friend.
>> However, if we could not call each other, I would go to an information desk and ask them to make an announcement about my friend.
Or how about making a rule with friend during traveling?
Or how about making a rule with friend during traveling?
>> Perhaps, I can make a rule with my friend during our travel.
If we lost each other, we should meet at the entrance.
>> CORRECT
It’s the rule during the travelling between us.
>> We can have this rule during our travel.
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