Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What do you wish to give your parents if you have the chance to?
A: If I can, I wish to give them the things that they want to have.
I think giving the things that they want to have is the best thing that I can do for my parents, and they will be happy too.
And if I wish something, I will wish that I want to have what I want.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think giving the things that they want to have is the best thing that I can do for my parents, and they will be happy too.
3. And if I wish something, I will wish that I want to have what I want.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. If I can, I wish to give them the things that they want to have.
>>If I can, I wish to give them the things that they want to have.
2. I think giving the things that they want to have is the best thing that I can do for my parents, and they will be happy too.
>>I think giving the things that my parents want to have is the best thing that I can do for them, and they will be happy, too.
3. And if I wish something, I will wish that I want to have what I want.
>>And if I wish something, I wish that I will get what I want.
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