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There will be no traffic jam by the subway. So you don’t have to worry about late. But there are some jam-packed in rush hours.
Also it is more economy to use public transportation than to use own car. owning car costs management fee as oil, tax, maintanance fee.
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I am impressed with your ideas and practical reasons mentioned here, Heather! We really need to consider this situation thoroughly.-Faith-
There will be no traffic jam by the subway. >> There will be no traffic jam on the subway.
So you don’t have to worry about late.
>> Therefore, we don’t have to worry about getting late.
But there are some jam-packed in rush hours.
>> However, there are modes of public transport that are jam-packed in the rush hours.
Also it is more economy to use public transportation than to use own car. owning car costs management fee as oil, tax, maintanance fee.
>> However, there are modes of public transport that are jam-packed in the rush hours.
Also it is more economy to use public transportation than to use own car. owning car costs management fee as oil, tax, maintanance fee.
>> Also, it is more economical to use public transportation than to use our own cars.
owning car costs management fee as oil, tax, maintanance fee.
>> Owning cars costs management fee such as oil, tax, and maintenance fee.
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