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My husband and I are looking at retirement age at 60. At that time, we will build a two-story country house on the outskirts and provide a space for independent children to come and rest. Also, I plan to rent a small commercial space in the city center and rent it to my daughter who wants to run a cafe or small store. I also want to buy a camping car and go camping near the beach on weekdays.
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Eliana,
Good job here that you managed to express your homework in clearer statements.
See you!
Aki~
My husband and I are looking at retirement age at 60.
>>> My husband and I are looking forward to retirement age at 60.
At that time, we will build a two-story country house on the outskirts and provide a space for independent children to come and rest.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, I plan to rent a small commercial space in the city center and rent it to my daughter who wants to run a cafe or small store.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I also plan to rent a small commercial space in the city center and lend it to my daughter who wants to run a cafe or small store.
I also want to buy a camping car and go camping near the beach on weekdays.
>>> CORRECT!
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