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I don\'t understand anyone who collects what already looks like trash, but I think he has his own story. There are many people who don\'t understand my doll collection enough to call it beautiful trash, so I don\'t think I can evaluate that person\'s choice.
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Good afternoon, Eliana!
A collection when it is not properly handled and managed may turn into so-called \"beautiful trash\", well, that depends on the person collecting on how they give importance to their collection.
Aki~
I don\'t understand anyone who collects what already looks like trash, but I think he has his own story.
>>> CORRECT!
There are many people who don\'t understand my doll collection enough to call it beautiful trash, so I don\'t think I can evaluate that person\'s choice.
>>>Many people don\'t understand my doll collection enough to call it beautiful trash, so I don\'t think I can evaluate that person\'s choice.
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