Homework
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It seems that only the person who collects knows the joy of collecting. While collecting, my anticipation and excitement increase, and I even get pleasure from working hard to obtain one more item from my collection.
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Hello. Eliana
I appreciate you for spending time doing your homework! I agree , there are reasons why people collect things, eventuallyit wears off, when they had satisfied themselves. I don;t know but it happens to me. haha!
Aki~
It seems that only the person who collects knows the joy of collecting.
>>> CORRECT!
While collecting, my anticipation and excitement increase, and I even get pleasure from working hard to obtain one more item from my collection.
>>> CORRECT!
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