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Men prefer woman’s appearence to their ability.
So women are always care about their bodyshape.
When people get a job.
A sort of service companys want their employees to have good appearence.
So many men and women are getting plastic
Surgery to get a job and get a partner.
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I don\'t know if you have heard this saying, \"A beautiful face will age and a beautiful body will change but a beautiful soul will always be beautiful\". Have a happy day!
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Men prefer woman’s appearence to their ability.
>>> Men prefer women’s appearance over their ability.
So women are always care about their bodyshape.
>>> So women always care about their body shape.
>>> So women are always anxious about vanity.
When people get a job. A sort of service companys want their employees to have good appearance.
>>> When people get a job. Some service companies want their employees to have a good appearance.
So many men and women are getting plastic Surgery to get a job and get a partner.
>>> So many men and women are getting plastic surgery to get a job and a partner.
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