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2012-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Dear T. Aurora, Pronounciation is important to speak other language. Thank you for your kind explanation. I drunk alcohol with my coworker on yesterday. So, I will do my homework right now. Sorry. 1. Oppressive Now, Korean feels that president Lee does oppressive politic. So, Korean wants to be change president. 2. Despot They had life such as slave under Despot. 3. Mesmerize Sometimes, He mesmerized me by showing the magic.

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Today is a big day for a lot of Koreans. Choose the right people who will be leading your government really well. Good luck and take care. ^^   Dear T. Aurora, >>Correct!Pronounciation is important to speak other language. >>Pronunciation is important in speaking a different language. Thank you for your kind explanation. >>Correct!  I drunk alcohol with my coworker on yesterday. >>I drank alcohol with my co-workers yesterday. So, I will do my homework right now. Sorry. >>Correct!1. OppressiveNow, Korean feels that president Lee does oppressive politic. >>Now, Koreans feel that president Lee is an oppressive politician.So, Korean wants to be change president. >>So Koreans want to change the president.2. DespotThey had life such as slave under Despot.>>They lived a life like a slave under a despot.3. MesmerizeSometimes, He mesmerized me by showing the magic. >>Sometimes he mesmerizes me by showing a magic trick.

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