Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
What is your favorite mode of travel?
Actually before I went to the Philippines and the UK, I was a strict travel planner. I used to plan quite tight travel schedule and I tried to follow the plan exactly. Sometimes it\'s a bit stressful following all the schedule that I made. But after going abroad, I totally became a different person. Unlike before, I just chill and enjoy my mood during travel. I don\'t really make the tight plan and follow it exactly anymore. Just go where I want to go now, just eat what I want to eat now, just enjoy my mood in present travel. I realized I don\'t have to be stressed to follow all my plans. The most important thing is making our mood be free and happy from our plan then we could enjoy whole travel.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Well done and thank you for accomplishing your task! Keep up the good work!
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
Actually before I went to the Philippines and the UK, I was a strict travel planner.
>>> Before I traveled to the Philippines and the UK, I used to be a strict travel planner.
I used to plan quite tight travel schedule and I tried to follow the plan exactly.
>>>CORRECT!!
OR>>> I created detailed itineraries and followed them precisely.
Sometimes it\'s a bit stressful following all the schedule that I made.
>>>CORRECT!!
But after going abroad, I totally became a different person.
>>>CORRECT!!
OR>>>Now, I\'m more relaxed and go with the flow during my travels.
Unlike before, I just chill and enjoy my mood during travel.
>>>CORRECT!!
OR>>> I no longer make rigid plans and stick to them.
I don\'t really make the tight plan and follow it exactly anymore.
>>>I don\'t really make a tight plan and follow it exactly anymore.
Just go where I want to go now, just eat what I want to eat now, just enjoy my mood in present travel.
>>>I go where I want to go now, eat what I want to eat now, and simply enjoy my mood during my current travel.
I realized I don\'t have to be stressed to follow all my plans.
>>>CORRECT!!
The most important thing is making our mood be free and happy from our plan then we could enjoy whole travel.
>>>The most important thing is to keep our mood free and happy, which allows us to enjoy the entire trip.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.