Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning teacher Peye.
Everyday i connect with skepe in the office. Today is our election day, i was calling you at home. There is no camera so we couldnt see each other. but we can talk face to face tommorow.
-Friendship with the opposite sex.
There was a sexual descirimination in Korea and the other asian countries. We coulndt imagine freindship between man and woman.but, as time gose by, man and woman have a same opportunite in sociaty, there is sexual equality, so we have a atmosphere to think about friendship with the opposite sex.
I also have met a lot of girls in school and we called each other "friend". Right, we were friends, but i dont agree that we have a friendship each other.
In my case, unfortunately, i havent had a friendship with girls. When i really wanted to go out with one girl, it is method to become a friend with that girl. I think almost man has a same idea.
-i will countinue to write in next feedback.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I hope to see your face tomorrow. I know that every person has different opinions about the topic and I am happy that you are honest with your answer. I respect that. See you tomorrow! Thank you for making your homework.
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Good morning teacher Peye.
>>Good Morning Teacher Faye,Everyday i connect with skepe in the office.
>>I sign in on skype everyday in my office.
Today is our election day, i was calling you at home.
>>We are having our elections today, so I received your call at home.
There is no camera so we couldnt see each other. >>I don't have a camera in my computer so you couldn't see me.
but we can talk face to face tommorow.
>>But we will talk fae to face tomorrow.-Friendship with the opposite sex.
>>Correct!There was a sexual descirimination in Korea and the other asian countries.
>>There are seual discriminations between Korea and other Asian countries.
We coulndt imagine freindship between man and woman.
>>We couldn't imagine friendship between the men and women.
but, as time gose by, man and woman have a same opportunite in sociaty, there is sexual equality, so we have a atmosphere to think about friendship with the opposite sex.
>>But as time goes by, men and women have opportunities with the society, involving sexual equality, so we get an environment where we can accept having friends with the opposite sex.I also have met a lot of girls in school and we called each other \"friend\".
>>Correct!
Right, we were friends, but i dont agree that we have a friendship each other.
>>Right we were friends, but I don't agree to bing friends with them.
In my case, unfortunately, i havent had a friendship with girls.
>>Correct!
When i really wanted to go out with one girl, it is method to become a friend with that girl.
>>When I really want to go out with a girl, of course I will make her my friend first.
I think almost man has a same idea. >>I think almost al of the men have the same idea.-i will countinue to write in next feedback.
>>Correct!
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