homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. How does your family motivate you when you feel down?
my mother is good at catching people\'s emotion. When I feel down, she always catches my feeling immediately and asks me \"are you okay?\". I feel hers sincerity and love. It give me positive energy.
and my father gives me realistic advice or practical support. and my father make my perspective more wider.He has keen insight.
강사 첨삭
High sensitivity is a gift. Your mother\'s love makes it easier for her to know what your situation is like. Keep safe!-Faith-
Q. How does your family motivate you when you feel down?>> CORRECT
my mother is good at catching people\'s emotion.
>> My mother is good at catching people\'s emotion.
When I feel down, she always catches my feeling immediately and asks me \"are you okay?\".
>> When I feel down, she always catches my feeling immediately and asks me, \"Are you okay?\"
I feel hers sincerity and love.
>> I can feel her sincerity and love.
It give me positive energy.
>> It gives me positive energy.
>> It gives me positive energy.
OR Therefore, it can send positive vibes to me.
and my father gives me realistic advice or practical support. and my father make my perspective more wider.
and my father gives me realistic advice or practical support. and my father make my perspective more wider.
>> Also, my father gives me realistic advice or practical support, and he makes my perspective wider.
He has keen insight.
>> CORRECT
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