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2023-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Q.What do you think is the safest mode of transportation? What about the most dangerous? Why I think the safest transportation is airplane, because airplane\'s accidents are very rare. And I think the most dangerous is ship. Because when the weather is wrong, ship is turn into the water.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ann! Happy Monday! How are you? See you later! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think the safest transportation is airplane, because airplane\'s accidents are very rare.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 And I think the most dangerous is ship.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Because when the weather is wrong, ship is turn into the water.
>>> Because when the weather is strong, the ship will sink in the water.

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