Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Chammy.
I really enjoyed talking with you this morning
because I felt like I can answer easily than before.
>>I really enjoyed talking with you this morning because I felt like I could answer more easily than before.
You taught me when I get the question, don\\\\\\\'t
make atmosphere calm with saying nothing.
>> You taught me that when I get a question, don\'t create a dead atmosphere by saying nothing.
So I decided to say that \\\\\\\"Can you give me a time to think about it? or It was not the question I expected\\\\\\\"
>> So I decided to say, “Can you give me time to think about it? or It was not the question I expected\"
OR
>> “I didn’t expect that question, could you please give me time to think about it?”
OR
>> I am unfamiliar with your question, but please allow me to give my opinions as I understand them.
OR
>> I’m sorry could you please repeat or rephrase the question for me?
That gives me a time to think and be ready.
>> That gives me time to think and be ready.
And it makes me feel better to reduce my tension.
>>Correct
Whenever I have some mistakes, feel free to say it.
>>Correct
What I have achieved by working in the hotel
industry is that I can change my mind into the positive thing easily.
>> What I have
achieved by working in the hotel industry is that I can change my mind into a
positive thing easily.
Changing mind is really hard work as everybody
knows.
>> Changing one’s mindset is not easy as everybody knows.
But in my experience, to survive in this industry I must think everything positively.
>> But in my experience, to survive in this industry I must think about everything positively.
For more than 10 years, I have continued to try it.
>>Correct
Finally I made up for it.
>> Finally, I made up for it.
That can not get with money.
>> That is something you can\'t get with money.
No pain, No gain.
>>Correct
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