homework
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Q. What can you say about people who are mama’s boys and daddy’s girls? Should a good child always follow his parents?
A. When we grew up, we\'ll become adult, we\'ll go work. Then you always follow your parent\'s choice?
Sometimes we should do our choice, even you are a good child. We aren\'t always follow our parent\'s choice.
강사 첨삭
Wow Ann! I was surprised with your essay! You\'ve tried writing longer this time! Keep on!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A. When we grew up, we\'ll become adult, we\'ll go work.
>>> When we grew up, we\'ll become adults, and we\'ll go to work.
Then you always follow your parent\'s choice?
>>> Then, should we always follow your parent\'s choice?
Sometimes we should do our choice, even you are a good child.
>>> Sometimes, we have to do our choice, even if we are good children.
We aren\'t always follow our parent\'s choice.
>>> We don\'t always have to follow our parent\'s choice.
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