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2023-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “What did you learn in your childhood memories? and how you apply it in your current life. If none, why so?\" I learned to talk to others when I was young. I\'ve learned how to speak that I don\'t hurt the other person\'s feelings, and I\'m using it now . I think it\'s good.

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Hi, Jessica!

Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!

YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! 

-T.NIKKI ^^ 


I learned to talk to others when I was young. 
>> One of the things that I\'ve learned from my childhood was, I learned how to talk to other people. 

I\'ve learned how to speak that I don\'t hurt the other person\'s feelings, and I\'m using it now .
>> I\'ve also learned how to speak to others properly so that I don\'t hurt the other person\'s feelings. 

and I\'m using it now
>> I always apply my learnings up to these days.

I think it\'s good.
>> I think it is good that I am applying what I learned from my childhood instead of ignoring them, 

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