homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about “How important is sleep for you?\"
Sleep is very important for me.
If I don\'t sleep, I get very tired.
When I get tired, I can\'t do my work well.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)
YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
Sleep is very important for me.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Sleeping is very important for me.
If I don\'t sleep, I get very tired.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I don\'t get enough sleep, I would feel very tired.
When I get tired, I can\'t do my work well.
>> If I get really tired, I can\'t do my work properly.
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