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학생이 쓴 원문
Our transportation is well managed by government.
Buses and subways are run often.
The fuel of bus is changing by electric battery.
So they are quiet.
I think The bus system in Seoul is the best.
But Not every city has convenient system.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
I am happy to hear these things from you. Not all countries, enjoy such kind of convenience. Enjoy every blessing and never forget to be thankful.
Have a thankful day!
Aki~
Our transportation is well managed by government.
>>> The government well manages our transportation.
Buses and subways are run often.
>>> Buses and subways run often.
The fuel of bus is changing by electric battery.
>>> The fuel of the bus has been changed to an electric battery
So they are quiet.
>>> CORRECT!
I think The bus system in Seoul is the best.
>>> CORRECT!
But Not every city has convenient system.
>>> But not every city has a convenient system.
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