Homework
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Q: What other things affect your mood?
A: I think the main things that affect my mood is music.
I think the melody of the music affects my mood a lot, because when I\'m sad, I listen to sad melodies and that makes me feel more sad.
I think the smells can affect my mood too.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think the melody of the music affects my mood a lot, because when I\'m sad, I listen to sad melodies and that makes me feel more sad.
3. I think the smells can affect my mood too.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the main things that affect my mood is music.
>>I think the main thing that affects my mood is music.
>>The melody of the music affects my mood a lot, because when I\'m sad, I listen to sad melodies and that makes me feel sadder.
3. I think the smells can affect my mood too.
>>I think different smells can affect my mood, too.
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