Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I couldn’t recognize I spent a lot of money buying new clothes.
But It is common in my neighbors people are doing do that.
I sometimes think lf I want to save money,
I need to move another place.
Old people don’t want to follow the new fashion. They don’t want to be showing poor
and be worn out to other people.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Thank you for your homework, I agree with you that a person\'s residence affects her spending lifestyle. You live in Gangnam, and we know that Gangnamn is an area of rich people. So you cannot avoid spending a lot of money on clothes because it is what others do in your community.
Have a great day!
Aki~
I couldn’t recognize I spent a lot of money buying new clothes.
>>> I didn\'t realize that I spent a lot of money buying new clothes.
But It is common in my neighbors people are doing do that.
>>> But this is common, My neighbors are doing that as well.
I sometimes think if I want to save money, I need to move another place.
>>>I sometimes think if I want to save money, I need to move to another place.
Old people don’t want to follow the new fashion.
>>> CORRECT!
They don’t want to be showing poor and be worn out to other people.
>>> They don’t want to be Labeled as poor and be worn out by other people.
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