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Q: What are the things that you will probably stop doing once you become an adult?
A: I think the first thing that I will stop when I become an adult is studying.
It\'s because except when I\'m in the university, I don\'t need to study, and studying is one of the most boring thing that I need to do.
Also, I\'ll probably stop eating snacks.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because except when I\'m in the university, I don\'t need to study, and studying is one of the most boring thing that I need to do.
3. Also, I\'ll probably stop eating snacks.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the first thing that I will stop when I become an adult is studying.
>>I think the first thing that I will stop doing when I become an adult is studying.
2. It\'s because except when I\'m in the university, I don\'t need to study, and studying is one of the most boring thing that I need to do.
>>It\'s because I don\'t need to study anymore, except when I\'m in the university, and studying is one of the most boring things that I need to do.
3. Also, I\'ll probably stop eating snacks.
>>CORRECT!
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